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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Come look at my gallery if you like Krad and Satoshi. There's more coming soon! :shamelessly advertising the doujinshii:
but thanks anyway =3
From this picture, I can only see 3 noticeable flaws. Firstly, the character in green's head is too big in proportion to the rest of his body. You can actually fix this by using the lasso tool and selecting the head, copy it on a new layer, reduce the size, then paint over the bottom layer with clothing. Secondly, his forearm is too short in proportion to his...uhh...biceps? Whatever that part of the arm is called. Lastly, and probably the most noticeable part is his hands, fingers specifically which look too skinny as well as flat. I see you attempted to give it volume by using the shadows and the blur but if you looked at the fingers (the index one specifically), you'd see what I mean.
Other than that, it's a wonderful composition.
I'm glad you like the composition though, I find that to be the most important. Anatomy is something that you can know and still just mess something up different in each picture.
Sorry it took though =<